following plan was the starting point for the correction:
were some flaws with this plan exists. One of the criticisms was that the colors of the public and private open space were identical. However, this was apparently the quality of the print because the colors were perfect for my on-screen, as seen also at the top. Therefore have I changed the colors to a yellow-green cast, so it worked!. Moreover, the strains in the trees criticized as too obvious, so I have this reduced significantly:
The legend I had to clearly arranged under one of two plans, so that was not clear that those on both plans include. Therefore, I have the legend now arranged so that it lies between the two plans, and thus at first glance it becomes clear that the legend gillt for both plans:
The biggest mistake the charge was, however, the Layout. The plan was simply too many white faces. Therefore I have drawn the details on a scale of 1:250 significantly larger and thus filled a large part of the area. That's what I had ordered the general view on a scale of 1:500, including adding the legend and editor name, which almost no open space is more on the plan:
The AutoCAD file here and the plan as a pdf file be downloaded here.